a single tear rolls down my cheek
as i am unable to speak
i dont know what is wrong with me
i do not have a clue, i cannot see
but could it quite possibly be
all the memories of you in me?

^^i quite like that one

pairs of eyes bore into me
eyes of yours
i cannot see
in the darkness
they do hide
stabbing daggers
at my side
feeling lonely
as they watch
like faithful cronies
keeping stock
feelings of hate
boil up inside
things that ate
at my divide
no feeling left
no heart for glee
a big huge void
resides in me

i dont know about this second one here really...any input?

hey look i made a poem...

tearing me apart
is the pain i feel inside
this pain of feeling lonely
that just will not subside

i dont know what has caused it
i dont know why its mine
i wish it would just go away
and take someone elses time

input?

i neeeeeda happy poem! heres part of one that i wrote about dragons...just for fun!

Dragons are the mythical creatures
that have green and scaley features
teeth of silver,  claws of gold
some had hearts that were so cold

Wings of leather to fly so high
up up into the sky.......

thats really about all that i have of it...lol i need some suggestions cuz when i tried to finish this one it was really stupid...lol

well im having troubles writing anything good lately so ill give you one of my old ones...

 feelings mixed | emotions stirred | vision blurry | hearts absured | body trembling | mind awry | feeling something | pass me by | confusion sets in | body falls | blood spatters | on the walls | on the floor | bloody heap |she has taken |a big leap | mind settled | body still | hearts severed | vision nill | emotions gone | feelings numb | feeling helpless | she is done | a red puddle | on the floor | where she rests | forever more

it just kind of came to my head but its not suicidal or anything. so dont worry.                        hopefully ill have something new for your enjoyment soon. thanks.